'Few Holiday for These Dads' by Tony Hicks,the writer describles the increasing number of stay-at-home dads in the United States these years.The social reaction shows a certain accetance in some degree.In many countries men go to work and take responsibility of the home ecomomy. This transaction is not easy in the society,but gives men another chioce and helps to build father-child relationship as women earn money more,obviously more common in relatively wealthy suburbs.Nevertheless,some moms still feel hard to work outside,they miss the time to share with their children.Many opinions and situation exist according to the way of earning money,but loving children is the most important and significant.
Environmental Refugees Unable to Return Home by Joanna Kakissis, describes the life of poor areas, where people are short for money to live a normal life. A large number of residents do not have enough money to pay for their daily cost, like food,house,even more education. Low income and bad living situation have compeled them to move one place to another, this phenomenon exists from generation to generation. As Joanna presents, in Bangladesh, the refugees are vulnerable to global warming,floods, and other natural disasters. Most of them want to settle down, but actually it is hard to change this condition. Above fifty percent people in Dhaka stay in slums, child missing and trafficking happen frequently. They can't plant cereals as they wish, because these places have no more water and soil. No money and resources, disease should be a big problem. Many countri...
Review first sentence structure; you have two subjects. Your formatting needs to be revised. Spaces should come after all punctuation. This is a comma splice: "The social reaction shows a certain accetance,it also gives men the option..." This is copied directly from the text and is considered plagiarism: "loving children openly is one of the most masculine thing one can do. " Please see me about his and remember that you can never copy. You will receive a '0".
ReplyDeleteYes,Mr.Dererk,I have realized this big problem.I'm sorry for my ignorance.I have checked it and pay more attention to this part.
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