'An Upheaval ' by Anton Chekhov,the writer descrides that a well-educated younggirl callded Mashenka came home and found her household in a terrible turmoil,then she went into her room,a search going on,it was a mess.From a servant,she knowed the lady of the house searched a lost brooch in the room without her permission.She got angry ,down,scared of this,and decided to leave.The man of the house Nikolay was sorry to Meshenka for his wife's rude behaviour,he saw Meshenka packing,talked with her so much to let her stay here,and said the truth that it was him who stoled his wife' brooch only for money.Knowing this,Meshenka amazed and frightened,went on packing,no more useful words from Nikolay could change her mind .At last,Meshenka left.
The whole story is an upheaval,I think,the mean,unknown,rude,rich lady of the house took of all the man's money and everything,and showed no politeness,illegal ways to the other people,including her own husband.The man of the house was exhauted,irresolute,of no significance.So,such a well-educated young girl was treated by a terrible rude illegal way.
If I were Meshenka,I would control myself,the house-lady need to apologise to me,but not in that real condition,maybe I would do the same as Meshenka.Actually,two years ago,a girl came to my house to live with me because she couldn't adapt to the bad living condition of her school.The girl was rude sometimes.The first two months I said nothing about her,but at last I wrote some words to her to show my unwilling.
The whole story is an upheaval,I think,the mean,unknown,rude,rich lady of the house took of all the man's money and everything,and showed no politeness,illegal ways to the other people,including her own husband.The man of the house was exhauted,irresolute,of no significance.So,such a well-educated young girl was treated by a terrible rude illegal way.
If I were Meshenka,I would control myself,the house-lady need to apologise to me,but not in that real condition,maybe I would do the same as Meshenka.Actually,two years ago,a girl came to my house to live with me because she couldn't adapt to the bad living condition of her school.The girl was rude sometimes.The first two months I said nothing about her,but at last I wrote some words to her to show my unwilling.
You have some good ideas here but remember to fully develop your paragraphs. You will also need to review your sentence structure. We will study this next week.
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