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Thesis statements,topic sentences and counter-arguments

          Although opponents argue that mobile technology is a distraction in the classroom, it should be beneficial for students and teachers with an appropriate way to use during classes.           The first reason that using mobile technology should be allowed in the classroom is that it has been proved to strengthen the interaction and collaboration among students and teachers.            Now,technology has changed, laptops and smartphones have become so popular. It may be true that traditional learning has been still adopted by a large number of schools and universities throughout the world. However, this doesn't mean that mobile learning can't bring benefits to education and be allowed in the classroom. Consequently, the conclusion is wrong. Moreover, the argument implies that mobile technology is most harmful to students' study compared to the past teaching. This is obviously not true. Therefore, th...

sentences about PEDs Bans in sports

          Many of currrent people consider that PEDs should be banned for competitors, just a few think of that can be harmless.           Some athletes use drugs to win the competition, this causes a serious problem in society, as Bradbury (2012)  states, "The problem is we can't set the penaities high enough to deter use effectively: getting away with it is just too valuable" (para.4)           The situation is not only extremely dangerious to the sport system, but also could end those drug-using athletes' career, which would lead to turbulence to some parts of the society.           Obviously, that athletes use drugs and cheat people is difficult to prevent. Moreover, the abusing of PEDs increase the health risks, "as I have listened to fighter discussing their performance-enhancing drug use, along with their accompanying heart, kidney, liver, bone, brain and psyhiatric ailment...

If the newers live in a lower economic standard

             If the first encounters live in a lower economic standard in India, life may become a suffering for them. First, dietary culture index is decreased for the new encounters, they would hardly focus on in work or study places. Second, transportation in lower economic areas is always a big trouble, that is to say, the new encounters may get stuck on the way to companies or schools. Third, people in that lower standard may behave in unnormal habits, this may cause an oppressive duration for the new encounters. Anyhow, it is not always the same for all, "My homestay is very bad, the floor is always dirty and they almost provide any food for me." one Japanese classmate once told me. Actually, it depends on specific circumstances. Before coming a new palce, people do not know what will happen. As an experience, even though the encounters may not have a cosy environment, just taking another look at it, people can find what the more significant poin...

thesis+3 topic sentences

           One significant characteristic of  both Chinese and Japanese culture is the family structure, which have both similarities and differences.           The first common sameness is that more yong people live with their parents, while there are some differences between the two countries.                The second feature in the family structure is that grandparents always live alone, the yongers usually visit the olders in some certain time, both countries share the similarity. At the same time, according to the speaker's discription, "The anverage longevity is beyond eighty-one in Japan, some older people are still healthy while their age are already one hundred."          The last point in common is that the previous generation have more brothers and sisters than this generation.

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           One significant characteristic of  both Chinese and Japanese culture is the family structure, which have both similarities and differences. The first common sameness is that more yong people live with their parents, while there are some differences between the two countries. In Chinese modern families, most parents only have one or two children.  As the Japanese speaker descrides that "Japanese families generally have three or four children." An obviously distinction appears in this repect. The second feature in the family structure is that grandparents always live alone, the yongers usually visit the olders in some certain time, both countries share the similarity. At the same time, according to the speaker's discription, "The anverage longevity is beyond eighty-one in Japan, some older people are still healthy while their age are already one hundred." Such phenomenon is rare in this world. From the conversation, there gives a fact tha...